The part that is going well for this peace is that the way I am making the lines for the negative space look more like the lines that cross but it is more joint than it looks with the detail. The art that is not working is that the head looks like it is missing from the pitcher and it does not look right with out the head on the body. The only problem I hade run into is the part with the space with the head and all that empty negative space and how the body looks like the headless horse man. The way I solved it was to fallow the pitcher with the lines on the paper. No changes to it so fare and it is looking great as well.